Well my friend looks like you cut the tails square. Look at some of the marabou jig that this guy ties and try to duplacate them Crappie Jigs Home Page. The squaring of of the tail will give you alot less action. Go to a bait shop an watch for a few minutes the minnows swim. I wouldn't use the stems of the feathers for tying tail, only the fluff. Strip it off the stem and make it as even as possible. The color combo is good tying technic looks sound my only concern is the tail.Take a look at the jig pictures sticky at the top of this forum it is a wealth of knowlege some time a picture is worth a thousand words. But then again what do I know.
Redman